Apr 28, 2008

Solar Wind

i smelled the sun
scent fennel sweet
fierce face melt heat
singing layers of rot
inside me as
million degrees
dissolved bitter
bones into surahs
burned kisses
on my neck
eyelids
hands

the hottest gust stream
promised
cardamom dust
and particles of you
inside me
       sun struck
i
became
molasses

6 Comments:

Blogger pomegranate queen said...

this is indeed a repost, but it's revised and i felt the need to post it again.
i love the feeling it invokes. i posted it as a reminder of sorts.
peace
pq

10:17 AM  
Blogger Jamilah Malika said...

face melt heat

that is superb. lovelove. i am so excited for you...

10:42 AM  
Blogger Shirin said...

This is beautiful. I'm so proud of you!
Shimps

12:15 AM  
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8:46 AM  
Blogger sdg1844 said...

That's a beautiful poem. I can see it and feel it. Good stuff!

2:31 PM  
Blogger rabfish said...

wow, amazing

10:20 AM  

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