May 13, 2008

In the Moment

under red light
bedside lamp
contours of your face
pull me in
to trace your presence
with the tips of my fingers
                  breath bares skin
behind my neck
the small of my back
you
travel
                  slow
in this instant
in the red glow
of this present
                  tense
i unravel

4 Comments:

Blogger sophistiphunk said...

yo. wow.

7:32 PM  
Blogger Jamilah Malika said...

stunning
beautiful

pleasing to the eye and the ear.

you know you are a poet?

1:37 PM  
Anonymous Susana said...

THIS was the one i was talking about.

this one.

i need more of you in my life, woman.

2:18 PM  
Blogger pomegranate queen said...

thanks for the nice comments :)
means a WHOLE lot coming from all you brilliant women.

5:10 PM  

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