Apr 17, 2006

Love is Stronger than Pride?

Ms. Sade,
You got it all wrong
I mean,
The winter's come and gone
And I'm still waiting...

Stuck in a dialect of pride
I stutter fear of rejection
Cold words numb my tongue
As I sing songs of lost affection
Like:

I still really really love you
But love 'aint stronger than pride
I still really really love you
But love 'aint stronger than pride

4 Comments:

Blogger rabfish said...

this is making me bawl

that second stanza is just meant to be read out loud, the rhythm jumps off the page

11:16 AM  
Blogger nubian said...

beautiful and painful at the same time

2:17 AM  
Blogger Pomegranate Queen said...

thanks - writing it was both beautiful and painful at the same time.

12:03 AM  
Blogger DivineLavender said...

I hear you!

1:18 AM  

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